I read this story to and it really seems great. The descriptions of the people in your stories and the way you word things make the story just THAT much better. I wish I could read the rest. :D

wow i love it! it's too bad i can't read it here :( it's a really promising story :)

I like this beginning, and I think this story has great potential. Your writing is rather excellent from what I can tell. I'm intrigued to find out more (darn those copy-cats stealing your work!)

Amazing story. Keep up the great work.

The plagiarism is such bull. I loved reading this story. It made me actually cry. (: Your work is always consistently amazing.

this is definitely one of my favorite stories.

Hi, i loved this story, to bad u took it down would have loved to read it again.

Hi, this was another story I absolutely loved on FP along with They Call it a Cliche by angels and effects. I just wanted to say good luck with your writing and hopefully you guys will be able to trust FP again one day.

Hey,

This story is definitely one of my favorites on FictionPress. I read it before all the plagarism, but I didn't get the chance to review it. I just wanted to say that it's really good, and the ending made me cry. Good luck with your writing!

xtheonlyonex

This is probably one of the most interesting stories I've ever read.

It's mystery and unlike many other romance stories it doesn't actually 'physically' introduce the main boy character (Dominic) instead it refers to him in the first chapter.

I really want to read more ]

And, I'm annoyed at all the plagiarism of stories going around. [

It's not fair for the writers that work hard to produce their stories.

(sigh)

XoRhymes

:( I just found your livejournal blog...thing? I'm really sorry about all this. I read the first chapter adn then was interested to see if you'd posted anything about the plagerism on the other chapters.

You had and I'm glad I read them.

I'm sad, not gonna lie, that I'll never get to read this story again - especially since it was my favorite of yours, but I find it ridiculous that anyone would try to steal your work.

Obviously I wouldn't ever want to post anything again after I discovered that. and holy crap! why would a kid, an adult, and even more do that! I hate people like that.

So yes, I'm sad - extremly sad - but I also realize this needs to be done.

Good luck in the future and when you publish through New York I'll buy YOUR work and not through someone else.

Solisluna

P.S: this probably seems suspicious because I just applied to be accepted to your life journal but I'm not reviewing to get accepted. Okay, that sounds suspicous too, but I'm honestly just trying to let you know that I will support you :D even though you don't have your stories and even if I'm not accepted.

Keep it up! I'll look for you in Barnes and Noble :P

What a terrible thing to have happen to you. I'd be heartbroken if I were you. I'm more sorry for you than I can say.

Are you sure you can't prove that the work is original when you have the timestamps?

Aurgh, you probably won't even reply to this because this story is so old. But I just wanted to say that what I saw of your work was flawed, sure, but it was good. You need to publish some day.

If you get this, I hope you're doing okay with everything. Maybe drop by my profile and say hi or something.

That really sucks. I was just getting into this story too, the first three chapters are good, when I read your Author's Notes.

Have you ever considered / ? It's connected to HarperCollins and (I tried before writing this review so that I would be able to tell you for sure) you can't even highlight anything on the pages, let alone copy and paste them. They also address questions like that in their FAQs. Plus, I believe that they take the top five manuscripts each month and have someone from the publishing company edit them and see if they're good enough to be printed. It might be something for you to look into, if you want.

Hopefully you'll be on the shelves at the bookstore soon!

I am so sorry that someone would try and sell your works and to have you feel the backlash of that. If I were you, I would take my stories off the internet, too. I'd just like to say that Mating Habits of the Popular and the Petty, Abide With Me, and Everyone Hates Logan, were my absolute favorite stories on Fictionpress because they had real quality. Mating Habits of the Popular and the Petty was an amazing story with incredible character development. Abide With Me completely sucked me into the world of Mia, Channing, and Peregrine, as well as their all too real emotions. Everyone Hates Logan was just...wonderful because of Logan's obvious struggle with his own personality and feelings.

I feel disgusted that anyone would actually steal these stories, but at the same time, I feel disappointed that I won't be able to read them online ever again. However, if you ever publish Abide With Me, I will definitely buy it. Mia and the others were some of my favorite characters. Again, I hope this doesn't deter you from writing some more wonderful stories that may one day get published. Good luck and I hope to one day see these amazing stories again. :)

i just want to say that i LOVE your stories because of how descriptive you are about your characters and the creative plots. not many authors are that creative and i think it absolutely sucks how people plagiarize your work and call it there own and even sell your work. although i only read 2 of your stories i have a feeling i would LOVE the others too. it sucks how you wont re post them up anymore but i really support your writing and i think if you ever publish one of your stories into a book it would be a best seller. i really hope you'll continue writing and posting stories. you have support from your readers. :D keep up the awesome work. :D