Great poem! I enjoyed the last half most, but the first half is definitely not without merit. The only part I sort of have a problem with is Free the captive unicorn / From an unthinkable destiny. It doesn't quite flow as well as the rest, but it's still good. It makes sense.

I think... this is a wondeful poem! especially the end is good.

I like it, you speak for yourself but in a way that lets others listen without feeling intimidated. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.