Reviews for First Meeting
MoriMorte chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
this is an awsome story it's briliiant!
somethingsup chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
lol! What a crazy start. The mom's funny.
Debbie-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Hm... it's a nice story. There's a little too much dialouge, not nessesarily a good thing. There's not really much to review, but you need more description, less dialouge.