Reviews for Jesus Walked Across My Belly
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
This is absolutely amazing, I love all of it, but most of all I love the way you "normalize" the "holy man" very well done.

SJMD chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
did you read the da vinci code? hey it's a great peom...reminds me A LOT of that book (but not a plaguristic way) it's a great peom. great work, and thks fo rthe reviews. good luck good writing-SJ
molzi chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
creepy, but well written
boy that you loved chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
what have they got that makes them so special? why do they get 'special' treatment? how is it that they make the rules? i won't pretned to understand your motivation or your skill, but i enjoyed it.

good piece.

'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
pale doll chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
I don't like this at all. It's kind of disgusting. I've read some of your stuff before and I don't think it's any good, sorry.

p.s. Don't you mean 'slit my throat' instead of slip?
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
almost vulgar. for show or for depth? more than likely the latter, but i'm no judge.

Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
this is good.
Shiva the destoyess chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
I like it...not keen on jesus...but awesome...
naughtgreen chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
You do have quite a way of being disturbing.
account not in use chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Damn. Thhat was pure candy. Love it, so, so good.
Isis ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
This is a great poem. The unique point of view really left me speechless. I love it.
D Byron chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
At first I wasn't sure of this poem, but as one reads, it gets better and better; I really like it. The ending is awesome. My favourite line has to be "grand enough to grind a virgin".
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
This was really good!
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