Reviews for Weathered Love
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
"A mere slip of the tongue

In sweet honey dipped" I really like that bit. but in genral I like the second half, more. to me it makes more poem though. short and honey dipped :D
mattrc chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
This is awesome! It gives me an idea of what you might mean, but doesn't just blurt it out and ruin the mystery of what every line actually meant. Another very well-written poem.
Thyrt chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
awesomenessgreat job )
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
interesting... I like it.. what's up with the line though?
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Flows very well. 2nd half was my favorite. Keep it up.