Reviews for The Bottom Line
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
it sucks when I fail too... luckily I don't anymore. great work on this.

Cool-Ruzz chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Short but real good and real realistic, indeed! Its dissapointing and it upsets up to see that you'd fail a test and all. This was creative! Good Job!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
lol~~ must of been disappointing~

keep writing!
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Greta job capturing this, I know the feeling to well (i always goof off with my friends, flirt with the guy i like, and by the time I'm ready to learn something, i'm past being saved.).
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
aw such a sad ending! weow. very impactful piece!
queenvixta chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I can relate to this all too well. Simple yet very meaningful. Very nicely written. QueenVixta
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
aww - I know what you mean...I hate when one teacher gives you this bad grade among all the other a's.
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
This is so realistic. Very Nice!~

Thanks for the review!~)
betweentheshadows chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Short and to the point, but I think we grow sometimes from failure. We know that to approach a task like this in a different way next time. And one paper doesn't mean we've failed as a human being...there's plenty of other things to succeed in academically and not...but yes, I hate it when I work so hard to study for my math test and then it ends up bad, but there's always hope for next time...but anyway, that's how I connected to your poem. Keep it up! :)