Reviews for Seconds Secret
Plinky chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Wow, this was lovely. I loved it. Beautifully written, really gorgeous.

Lovely description of the secret. Keep writing!
hann chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
sad but good, you have a very nice way of writing things x x
Thyrt chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
aw, the ending was really sweet 'our touch was enough' i liked that
Artemises Linux chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
This is intresting, and I can relate to it, sort of. It's good n.n

Linux
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
so sad... especially that last line
deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
I like the picture you painted with the poem. Great job!
Fuinixe chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I like the second half much better than the first.

There should be more.
forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
very nice. i'd write more than that, but sometimes poems don't need a long review because a few words can say everything.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.