Well to start off, great rhyme scheme here... and the flow was great when I read it outloud.

At first it reminded me of ponochio and then I found it darker and more Puppet Master type piece, not that it isnt unique... those were just things that popped in my mind.

I think you did an awsome job with this. I think it is very relatable to everyone whose ever been used by someone, especially someone they think they can trust completely.

Wow, just an amazing piece. Bravo to you once more Dear Roth as always.

Really deep. I like how it all turned out.