Really liked this chapter X3 I love the relationship between Marit and Oliver 3 Oliver is cute. And I like how Rafer and Merle haven't dulled down their relationship any from marriage ;D Stories can often make it seem that way.

So...GASP! IS THIS THE END? I THINK IT IS. If it's not, then correct me with an even more fabulous last chapter XD But if this is indeed to end, I think you did a nice job. It ties off the loose ends. For example, Merle's father is now happy and in love with his granddaughter. I think that's really true :) How people often change with new family members. I also love how Rafer was making fire forms XD Tehe

Great job. Love the story! 3 This is one of those that you'll remember in the back of your mind during everything. I found myself getting excited when I saw those author alert emails in my box :3 I love the feeling of anticipation!

THANKS FOR WRITING THIS. 3 Your story is amazing!

NO

ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS!

:-(

Oh mah gawd 3 This chapter was super cute. My favorite lines:

“Hey! Now, that already has an owner and trust me, Katherine, it isn’t you.”“Your wife's?”“Precisely, now if you excuse me…”

Haha, the fact that he sounds so proper and determined is a real crack up 3 Gotta love Rafer. And then how Merle was like 'I'm a WET poodle.' Teehee n.n Love Merle too. Why don't we just make that: 'Love Rafer and Merle together.' Yea...that's good. ;)

I also like how Rafer knows Merle is IT for him. Even though that phrase sounds over-used, it really was just perfect here.

MERLE THREW A VASE AT RAFER'S HEAD? XD lmao.

ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS? No :( God, that makes me sad. 3 Well, please finish it nicely! I can't wait to read a fantastic ending!

Ooh nice ending :) GASP! It's so awesome that rosiedreamer gave you tons of reviews. I think if you had a lot of reviews, people would be more likely to read this story ;D Great job on the chapter! Can't wait to read more 3

anyway i hoped i helped and made you feel better

your story rocks

and i hope to read other works of yours

luv always

rosiedreamer

ps

i have a story (The Demon's Cat) hint hint nudge wink

ahnd let me tell you this-

fictionpress is addicting

i'm a fp ADDICT

i'm serious I get DEPRESSED and in BAD MOODS without it

it's like a drug for me

well it's your kind of stories that entertain me

you're probably like

what a sad sad girl she must be really bored

unluckily though

i can't give you more than 20

i think

and let me tell you this

you deserve about 500 reviews

you are a very talented writer

i hope i didn't hurt feelings make you mad or anyhting of the sort

i love your story i really do

see told you

had to switch comps but so what

o now i'm hooked

ok sorry if on the 1st and 2nd chapter reviews i sounded a bit... rude, mean, ugly, stupid, b**chy, snobbish, i hate everyoneish, repulisive, obnoxious, and everything else and i'm really sorry i hope if i hurt your feelings then mabey a double review would help?

on each chapter

- my pen name is rosiedreamer

and here i go