WOW. That was amazing. Part 2 (which is part 3, but that's cool, I get it) is far superior to part 1, in my humble opinion. Much more...varied? Yes. It's more varied in emotion, because you play up on opposites a lot more. That's what makes the whole story work. Opposites. Love versus hate, fear versus trust, good versus evil. It's positively steeped in them, and it really tugs at the emotions. I guess this one was more romance heavy too, which I adore. But it was such a sick romance, and that strangely kept things interesting. I never had any idea what I was supposed to feel or think about what was happening.

I felt ~guilty~ for loving this fic. How fricking awesome is THAT?

You rock. Don't stop writing, and don't let any morons convince you you're not good. Ever. Morons do that sort of thing sometimes. Keep going, you can make your living at this.

Thank-you for sharing your work with us!

-May

I'm horrified! No no no! He can't die! He can't die! No no no no no! HE CAN'T DIE!

""I want you to stay at the angel resort with me."

I shook my head, smiling a little emptily. "I can't do that. I have to stay with him. I'm changing him, and now that I've gotten this far. . . I won't turn away from him.""

I am so, so, SO relieved that Lure is getting better. And yeah, she'd better not fricking give up now, she threw her whole life away for that man! lol. And now that's she's getting to him, he's just so lovable.

GAHH! %#$ $#&%&*$&%$# %

HE DID IT AGAIN! HE WENT AND WAS A COMPLETE BASTARD AGAIN! GRR!

WHY, oh WHY can't anything work out ever? Kat is going to lose it. She should lose it anyway. I suspect about Andrea and Neon, but this huge master plan of Lure's...bloody hell, where's the mercy? He doesn't love her. He doesn't. What is the definition of love? You can't want misery to befall those you love. You just can't. (sighs) But I guess ~he~ can.

This is so unbelievably terribly sad.

Poor Kat. I can't believe how horrible everything has been going for her. Her whole life sucks, then she dies and becomes an angel, only to have things continue to suck, be faced with the truth that the man she loves loves her in return and she can't be with him because he's EVIL, and now they want to chop her wings.

Somebody needs to have a mental breakdown.

Oh God. He actually loves her. She actually loves him. He was almost...nice just now. And she managed not to ramble on and on incessently.

:( It's cruel of you to get our hopes up like this!

;)

"“Hm. . . you can think of it this way. You’re Felix’s shoulder angel, and I’m his shoulder devil. Isn’t that just fun?”"

...and for some reason I can't stop grinning.

" “Not until you want me to stay, you want me to never leave you. . . and then I will leave you, and you’ll regret ever telling me to leave you alone.”" Sick and brilliant, as always. That's our Lure! (rolls eyes) I really want all this to end well, and it just can't, can it?

(grins) And why am I so pleased that Lure has shown up?

She's an angel now.

AWESOME!

Oh my God, yet another highly disturbing fic. I have to read it, you know. Neon. Neon can NOT be some innocent human kid. What the heck is going on here? It has to be Lure. Somehow, it has to be. Kat genuinely loved her brother Tony, and now all of a sudden there's a little kid just like Lure. (frowns) Seems pretty coincidental.

You are awesome! I love your writing, and this is such a great concept. The whole thing. I can't believe how well you pull it off!

Aw... I've always loved a good phyco romance every now and than.

And that was just about the best story I've ever read.

The part where Lure is dying is so bittersweet and perfectly written that that is the place in this story that one can finally realize just what it is that bonds Lure and Katlyn together.

The ending is great, it lingers with the reader and is just enough to close out the story.

I hope this gets published.

-Sydney

Aw. That's a sweet ending. :D

I love it. Love, love, love it. _

NO! Oh gosh, ;_;. That's so depressing.