Reviews for The Contract II
Eccthlacine chapter 25 . 3/15/2009
Loved this one! I was a little wary of the other one, though I liked it, but this one was amazing! :) Very action-y and fun to read, came to absolutely adore lure and be completely confused about Deva. One thing I particularly liked about your work what that you kept demons...demonic. While he cared for Katlyn, Lure was still acted like a demon . Can't wait to read more of your work!
silver shaft chapter 25 . 3/11/2009
okay, so i was totally going to review every chapter this time. but instead i read this whole thing on my day off and decided to do a long one at the end lol.

ugh that freaky neon suffocating her with a pillow...damn him and how much he looks like lure. i kinda thought they would be related and i was way too pleased with myself when i found out they were :).

really like solar, guess its just that angel appeal haha. he could be nicer to katlyn though...but if he was too nice then how would lure ever compare?

ahaha every time felix was there it made me think of spy kids and how they're like "uncle felix!" and he's like "i'm not your uncle..." but yeah.

felt so bad for her when they ripped up her wings...assholes.

yay they -finally- did it! no lemon though? i always say im gonna do it but always chicken out...god.

whoa didnt see that sleet freaking out thing coming. he has problems. and poor lunar she loves him so much...but now she's going home with her bro yay :).

and aw i loved at the end when he was like protecting her with his wings, that was so sweet. never thought lure could be sweet. i could never put up with him and him always wanting to cut cut and "make her bleed"...i like him when he gets excited like a little kid though he reminds me of me :).

i think thats it...oh yeah deva! whats up with her? guess ill have to stay tuned...which is hard because im not very patient :).

excellent story though. i liked this even better than the first one.
Lesumi chapter 25 . 3/8/2009
So will there be a Contract 4?
intercostalspace chapter 25 . 2/20/2009
i'm glad you didn't push through with the original contract II since if lure doesn't appear much on it, i bet you'll lose quite a number of romance readers.

i think contract I & II were great! thanks for giving them a happy ending. it fits actually that they decide to tour the world or whatever since if they surround themselves with company they'll just encourage envy. without a doubt they're going to live happily ever after. :D
intercostalspace chapter 20 . 2/20/2009
Lure should punish sleet period
intercostalspace chapter 19 . 2/20/2009
Lure said, "I didn’t love you then—I just really, really wanted to hurt you..."

he didn't love her during "contact 1"? i wish you didn't write that. i'd like to think he loves her since contact 1 but he's a demon that's why he does what he does.
Caroline Viteri chapter 25 . 2/17/2009
Omg, I'm so glad I heard about this story. Literally the best story on FP so far (I've only been here for a few weeks ;P). But yeah, it was a good read and I'm so so glad that everything turned out alright for Katlyn and Lure. If The Contract series ever get published, it could probably be the new Twilight. I'm serious. I would totally buy your books, but I think I've said that before. Oh well. I'll check out some of your other work later. I haven't even started my homework. xD
Caroline Viteri chapter 17 . 2/17/2009
Omg they're having sex and you're not detailing it? D: let's see what happens next chapter.
Caroline Viteri chapter 15 . 2/16/2009
OMG, I can't believe they're gonna rip her wings off! Noo! D: I hope everything will be alright for Katlyn.. I really wanna see her end up with Lure once and for all... Oh well. _
Caroline Viteri chapter 7 . 2/16/2009
Ooh is this a love triangle I see? Looks like Solar's got it bad for Katlyn. Still, lurexKatlyn ftw! xD and i feel bad for Tony. It was sweet of Kat to leave that note for him. And I can't wait to meet Andrea. It's cute how it seems that Solar is jealous and Lure knows it. :3
Caroline Viteri chapter 4 . 2/16/2009
Yess, more Lure and Katlyn interaction! Too bad Solar had to come and ruin it.
Caroline Viteri chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
Yay! Amanda and Katlyn are back together again! And Omg, it was awesome how you made Lure appear at the end of the chapter and push her off the ledge. I missed hearing him say, "My little Kitten." I think he only ever said her real name twice. xD I probably need to get a life, but I have on intention to.
Caroline Viteri chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Ok so Neon killed Katlyn, then the angel Solar told her some stuff, now she's a guardian angel to a guy named Felix, and Kat's family thinks she killed herself. Awh, that's so sad. What really got me the most is that Katlyn died while her whole family was disappointed in her. I feel so bad for Tony, especially. He was just a little kid, and he lost his only sister. I hope things get better for Katlyn. And I really hope to see more of Lure sometime soon.
Caroline Viteri chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Oh my Jesus, this kid is annoying. xD Neon, what a weird name... I miss Lure, I want him back. :[ I feel really bad for Katlyn, being stuck in a mental institute, while actually being the only sane one there. I wonder where this story will go... I'm still not sure what the whole point to this Lure lookalike is, but let's just see where this goes.
We Used To Wait chapter 25 . 2/2/2009
One of my favourites of all time in fiction press. Thank you.
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