|Reviews for The Contract II|
| Marshie-kun chapter 25 . 1/29/2009
Oh my GOD! T_T This was so...I thought Lure actually died! BEST STORY EVER!
| Marshie-kun chapter 9 . 1/28/2009
| Fayre Meira chapter 25 . 1/13/2009
i am breathless.
| vi-is-shorter-than-charlix33 chapter 25 . 12/31/2008
it's me again... the one who was scared to read the second one in case you made me cry again. but i did it, and i read the end so fast i didn't hav time to cry. and then i reread it a coupla times cos i knew he didn't die and i could handle it. NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER make lure and his little kitten get separated. no! i couldn't handle it. they're too perfect... even if he is a slightly insane person...
can't wait for the rest, and the bit about the contract 3 and 4 and 2 rlly rlly confused me. but its too early in the morning so what can i say?
btw as continued in my pm, i just want to say that i have officially started my first supernatural-ish story in a long time. all the other ones just sorta... died. which rlly sucked. you have no idea how many pieces of paper are floating around with the prologues of stories.
| Camelia Sinensis chapter 25 . 12/20/2008
This was abso-fucking-lutely amazing!
And I'm not even a supernatural fan. At all. But this? Totally worth it.
I'm sure you've heard this before, but I hope you don't mind hearing it again.
Your writing just went from funny, to morbid, to sexy to sweet to tragic to action - and damn, girl, how the fuck d'ya do that? - in a matter of paragraphs.
I can assure you that I won't be forgetting a detail about the Contract (1 and 2 or 3 or whatever) anytime soon!
Thank you for writing this because it honestly made my weekend - Congrats!
| Mee.And.Yeew chapter 25 . 12/19/2008
when i started reading the contract 1 i was like wow this is good, then i saw there was a number too and it was just as good! I'm a bit sad to stop reading it though
if you ever get this published please let us know i would love to buy it
there isn't much to say that you don't already know about how amazing this story is. i really love it.
Don't forget to let us know about publishing!
| BunnySocks chapter 25 . 12/13/2008
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! You are so freaking talented! So now I can't wait to read the next part of this series...or the part before cause I'm kinda confused about that. Nevertheless, if you post it I will read it and if you publish I will buy it. :) Keep up the incredible work, thanks for sharing this with us! I'm glad that Katlyn and Lure are finally together.
| L'Archange chapter 25 . 12/11/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY! I've read CONTRACT at least twice. Loved it. Love this. You are awesome.
| rochemusique chapter 25 . 12/9/2008
Whew! The Contract and The Contract II in 2 days. Thanks the lord for home schooling ;) I must say, you are a terrific writer! You had me hooked after only the second chapter of The Contract. Throughout reading both stories, there was a quote on my mind:
"It's like I have a loaded gun in my mouth and I like the taste of metal." -Robert Downey Jr.
The quote makes me think of Lure and Katlyn's relationship. Even though, together, they are entirely messed up (which I love), in the end, it's really kind of poetic.
Two thumbs up!
| Jaliy chapter 25 . 12/7/2008
| Crimsonoaks chapter 25 . 11/29/2008
This was really amazing. Despite the fact that the ending is mildly sappy, it works really well. It's a bit strange but i dont think any other ending would have worked as well. And yes Lure did get a bit ooc, but it didnt find it too bad since a lot had happened by that time. overall, great job!
| LJANG chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
I'm dying to read a sequel! Do you have the original of 'The CONTRACT II' saved? Even though the idea was scrapped I would still love to read it. The ending was so-so for this one, I just liked it. The twist was definitely a shocker! A for that! I didn't even see it coming. At first when Lure said, "I hope it hurts" I had assumed that he was pretending the ENTIRE time and was going to really leave her. Glad that wasn't the case. My favorite part would have to be Katlyn's transformation into a fallen angel and the whole ordeal at the demon resort. BRAVO~
| Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
usually if a story have multiple chapters posted i only review for the last one (im horrible i know) but i have to give you kudos on this first chap. Very few understand the need for a powerful beginning, something that draws the reader in.
| koerle chapter 25 . 11/18/2008
After reading the first part I just needed this sequel. I wanted it. So badly...
And you know what? I loved every word. You really know how to write wonderful stories. I could just see the story in my minds eye as a beautiful movie.
This really was a beautiful story!
| Sunsetshadow19 chapter 25 . 11/17/2008
The relationship between these two is very odd from the get-go but it's nice to know that they've found a nice middle ground between their very different ways of looking at the world. I like the twists that you gave to the story and how different characters interact. The writing is really good and I look forward to reading more of yours stories.