Reviews for The Contract II
book.babe15 chapter 25 . 11/10/2008
loved it! it was amazing, i'm glad there was a happy ending! :)
xXReader.Desu.YoXx chapter 25 . 11/9/2008
Oh wow, i haven't wrote a review in a long time so I was confused on how to start...

Dear Bleeding Air,

I truly enjoyed reading the Contract (1 & 2), it was simply the best fantasty slash romance story I've ever read. The last chapter actually made me bawl like a little baby. YOUU! Bleeding Air, your amazing. Everything in here could be easily visualized, and I admire you for finishing this story although you mentioned that you had lost interest in it. I don't think that showed in the story, and it just proves how much of a good writer you are ;D
Inspired by Sadie chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
i just love this story. this idea seemed cliche at first - what with wishes and what not - but i read it for the heck and wow was i wrong. this is extremely creative and so well written. you used some great imagery in here - i remember the part about you describing the sun set the best. and you seemed to use different diction when you had katelyn in heaven and when she was with lure (love that name, btw). i also just love the love! i think soul mates are real and you dont get to pick Xp i just fell in love with this series and cant wait for the next one!
dramaqueen89 chapter 25 . 10/12/2008
This is my second time to finish both contract 1 and 2.

It's 4 am. HAHAHA.

It STILL made me cry.

It STILL made me laugh.

It STILL made me tear my hair out.

It STILL made me a little horny.

But most of all.

It STILL made me hot and heavy for Lure.

Even if he is a psychotic misanthropist.

God. How I love the twisted minds of demonic lovers :

Kudos to you, my man. This story is worth the late night hours :)
dramaqueen89 chapter 10 . 10/12/2008
I am in love with Lure.

Even if he is a sadomasochist, blood-loving asshole.

He leaned down and kissed my nose. “You’re so cute when you’re mad.” He cocked his head, reached up, and placed his hands on my cheeks. He pressed. “You look like a little blowfish.” He leaned down again and rubbed his nose against mine. “Grr.”

-That is too cute :))

“What you should do,” he began huskily, “is let me throw you onto the bed and take you very, very violently.”

-Anytime, babe. Anytime ;
Lovedward48 chapter 25 . 10/6/2008

I can't believe I'm through with the story! Damn, it was fucking awesome! Gosh, I actually started to like Katlyn! O.o

She's grown up and has become stronger! And Lure has become even more brilliant! They finally really, seriously love each other! *squeal* That's just so excellent! So fantastic! I don't think this story could be any better! You did a wonderful job! I read the whole "the contract-series-that is posted on this site" in like 3 days! It was so amazing!

Solar and Felix; I really like them! I loved the scene where Felixs house's burning down and he's all like "whatever! It's not that bad! And what if my home is lit up in flames? I'm just gonna wait here and look distressed. I think I can manage that, it shouldn't be 'that' hard!" I was laughing my ass off! XD

And Solar's so refreshing! He's not selfish but generous! I can see why Kat likes him!

The plot was mind-blowing! I loved it! I was so shocked when you revealed that it all (at least most of it ;) had been planned by Lure! But I was always suspicious of Deva so I wasn't too surprised when she turned on them! I'm just happy Kat could heal Lure or I'd be sending my own demons after you now! XD

Good luck with the plushing thingy! If they refuse they must have totally gone insane! O.o
Sneaky chapter 14 . 10/5/2008
I'm sorry I'm reviewing in the middle of the story and not waiting till I've read everything but I just HAD to say that I love, like REALLY love that scene at the end of the chapter! It was so calm, so serene and it was just awesome to see Kat and Lure happy together! Just accepting their love despite all the bad things, this moment was perfect! I wish they could always be like this! *pout*

But maybe? I'm not yet through with the story so I can hope, can't I? XD
dyingimmortal chapter 25 . 10/1/2008
This was an amazing sequel. I think Solar and Neon were particularly awesome. ;D Keep it up!
primosbeeching chapter 25 . 9/18/2008
I love it! Like how Lure broke Katlyn's heart and spirit in the first contract, it did it to me as well, but I couldn't NOT read the sequel! Ahh I feel complete...I especially love the part when the barrier comes up in the end, it actually nearly made me cry!
Booklover91 chapter 16 . 9/13/2008
AW '[

This was a sad chapter, I feel like crying.

No fair! I want Katelyn to be an angel, not a FALLEN angel. Ugh, I'm so upset.
Booklover91 chapter 14 . 9/13/2008
AW Lure was actually sweet at the end of this chapter ]

It was so cute, AW ]

I'm such a sap, lol...anyways, off to chapter 15. ciao!
Booklover91 chapter 9 . 9/13/2008
The last part where she was wlaking off, i SO knew he was gonna make the water do that and that she was gonna fall. how embarrassing! lol

Anyways, good chpater ]
Booklover91 chapter 2 . 9/12/2008
Ok, so I likme solar ]

he's sweet, and he sounds REALLY hot, even hotter than Lure. I cheated and see that she isn't gunna end up with Solar though. But maybe Lure will act right in this story and so I'll be happy about them getting together. Gah, you're so talented, anyways, off to chp. 3 D
AWESOMEFUL chapter 25 . 9/8/2008
Hey! I LOVED this ending! It fits perfectly and it's good you didn't kill off lure, how would you continue the series when the second major character died? And Katlyn would be weak again cause he wasn't there to effect her, lol. And there were too many things unanswered, an ending where he died would have been an amature mistake that I'm glad you didn't make.

I saw some of the other reviews and I must say. . . do NOT listen to the one's who said this was cliche. Because they obviously don't know what the word means. cliche is used for things that are used repeatidly, and, since you usually do sad endings, it became cliche for you to use a sad ending. Because it's expected, That's cliche. These people need to buy a frigg'n dictionary. Just like how a love triangle is cliche. lol. It's good to see that you made a different ending, explore them. I always make my endings different, no one knows what to expect. lol. Makes it more exciting. When I read the last chapter I was like, ". . . he died? How am I not surprised?" But then when he came back I was all WOW!

So anyway, the ending was love, and I really hope that you get these published soon and let us know when. And give us more Lure goodness, because he's honestly my Top favorite character from ANY story! He's at the top of my favorite fictional character list. ;) You write even better than most published authors! You rock my socks! XD I love how Lure and Katlyn stayed together, it shows that love can't always be easy and perfect, some are twisted and you have to really work at it. But in the end, it's all worth it.

Edgren Vis chapter 25 . 8/27/2008
I shake my fists at you for keeping me up to five inthe morning on a school night. I read the first and second in ONE SITTING.

I love both of them lots and lots!
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