Reviews for black fingertips
Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Wow. Had to read that one twice. I like the use of parenthesis and such. "She's no plain jane, baby."-That's my favorite part.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
very introspective, cool poem, i liked it.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I love this. I love all that you right, but you know how it is.

I like that this doesn't have to mean anything- it's a description, a tiny sliver of the life that we'll never ever know all about. Great.

-Hillary-
Unready chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
interesting poem, here. thanks for the review on my haikus
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Can we as people, ever really understand everyone else? I think this poem comes pretty close.

Juliet.
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
It was beautiful,the whole thing reminded me of crystals.I think it's because of the bit about tear drops and sugary .
godsandstars chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
very beautiful, and peaceful too. i love it times 57840572385-024.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
AWESOME!
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
it faintly reminds me of a gypsy, but that's just because of the 'charcoal dust'. the second stanza in particular is awsome!
acrobia chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Wow...this piece was touching; the imagery was just fantastic, and the depth of the words are resonating. Definatly one of my favourites!
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
good poem, very interesting. the brackets and dashes -