Reviews for Candles
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
it's short yet so concise...and very good metaphors...and i love the dual representations of the candle...that twist in the end is really clever of you...very good job...and pls. do check my poems if you have the time...

truly yours...
blossomed blooms chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
very good, ending made me lift my brows from your clever turn.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Contemplative, like a stream of thought, natural.