Reviews for Tokyo Sun
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Oo, I like the imagery as well.
Cesy chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Oh, nice. Very subtle, and some nice ideas there.

One thing, though - in your summary, you said "different than", which is incorrect English. It should be "different from", because the word "different" comes from "to differ", and you say "to differ from [something]". /end pet peeve.

Otherwise, great poem.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Wow very, very sad but I do like it though.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
love how blunt and sharp this is, your poetry is always fantastic and this just leaves me in dumbstruck awe. I love it.

* noelle
account not in use chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I love the blunt feeling in this, it's wonderful.
Beautifula chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Heya, that's cool (sorry I cant be stuffed logging in right now, I only have a minute online! Can't get on msn either :( )

Yeah, that was a good poem... i like.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Short...realistic and really good...loved it_