Reviews for My Lifelong Hero
anguissette chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
lovely poem, great tribute to your mother - they are so unappreciated!

Be careful when avoiding punctuation as it makes a poem more difficult to read. Simple commas and stops are enough to break the poem down into managable sections.

Well written! anguissette
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Heartfelt and honest; this was really moving, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.