Reviews for I'm sorry
myfathersdaughter chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Excellent.
CucumberPickles chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
I know exactly what you mean in this poem. I mean, just a few days ago(Friday to be exact), I was at this funeral of this dude who is supposed to be a family friend. All I heard people saying to the grieving family was 'I'm sorry' and such and such. There really isn't anything wrong that these people did but they just feel that that would be the best thing to say to the family. Sometimes, you don't know what to day and that's when you say sorry.
LadyAnesta chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
very powerful. the bold and italics emphasized your point, you picked great places for emphasis :)i'm not going to lie, i got a little teary at the 6th to last work.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Aw! That's a beautiful, emotive poem. I know exactly what you mean because I feel the same about something one of my friend's os going through. I love the use of italics and bold type, and the ending especially is really powerful. Great work.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.