wow...really good..i like it

omg abby this is just crazy good! I wish you were coming over tonite! this is how i feel about Drew! if he could be my first kiss then i would smile everyday! is this bad of me?

beautiful and oh-so sweet! i really LOVE the ending to this, very sincere and original. sorry if i sound all gushy right now, i'm in a really good mood. anyway, back to ur poem, totally LOVE the lines, very emotional. the beginning is especially heartwarming cuz of the way ur sorta asking questions. lovely poem, very nice. great job:-)

That was beautiful. Excellent imagery, and I like the switch between asking then telling.

awe! this is so sweet! me likey!