Reviews for Hallow Winter
Mangolious Kiwi chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
There's a few typos, but other than that it's pretty good.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Love the imagery. Some parts don't seem to flow quite as well as others. I think, for better clarity, you should change this to "Resorting to his common practice - lying" or something like that; I think a comma would suffice as well. Nicely done!
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
""I'm tired," he speaks the first true words in days" BRILLIANT!

so im guessing he doesn't love her, but just keeps her around so he's not lonely or people don't get the wrong idea?

AWESOME POEM
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Beautiful, beautiful. It rings very true, very real, yet at the same time very otherworldly. Excellent.