Their immaturity was frustrating, and yet that's what made it so funny! You did a great job.

oh. my. god. that was hilarious! i love love love it! My friend Arwen Starfire and me acted this out and oh my god, it sounds even better outloud. You fill it with this down to earth kind of humor which really takes some skill. Wow. We were laughing FOREVER about this piece. Awesome job, lots of smiles, raspberry twirl.

haha! that was so fucking funny! that actually is what teenage life's about. i liked boy's little diologues with himself. that was funny. my favorite line was "NO, YOU STUPID TWAT! THE PRICE IS NOW TWO DOLLARS BECAUSE OF INFLAMATION!" and at the end, boy and girl didn't really evolve, and then boy didn't even know what life was after all that! i showed this to my friends and then they printed this out and we performed it. well, that's what happens when i show my friends something. they become completely obsessed with it and go overboard! ha! well, that was awsome. i don't believe in the "favorite stories list" but i think this will be an acception.

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I loved it.

I can only imagine how fun it must of been to write.

Bravo.

haha. there really is nothing to say to that, it's true, way too true. fucking amazing

One thing to say: You're a fucking genius

if it was possible to die of laughter, I would have died a thousand times, I love this thing, I was reading it over in voices and it made my brother shoot milk out of his nose, great job on it