Reviews for In the Blink of an Eye
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
wow, beautiful and full of emotion i like, so much said in so little words

keep writing!
SKgus chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
it's just like your other poems: amazing.
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
hmm interesting. Good too.

-Shasta Valentine
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
'in the blink of an eye' never lasted so long. amazing.
youzi chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
i like the interseting way you seemed to have expanded an instant. keep writing D
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Clever: gives the impression her return is a bad thing until that last line. Despite that, the last line is also rather cynical. This is an excellent piece of work! Nice one!

Matt
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
This poem is full of suspense but very enigmatic.

Trinity