Reviews for Underneath the Covers
le roi des pirates chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
ahh this was so cute :] hehe thanks for sharing!
The Astronaut chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Wow, this is excellent. Pretty imagery. Nice and simple, and it really works. Love it!

xoxo, The Astronaut
aiur chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
you're brilliant at one in the morning. haha. this is really beautiful. i love it. your style is amazing and it really carried the entire thing. it was really sweet. sorry about the awful review. i'm usually better than this (okay maybe not). heh. but i really enjoyed it. nice work. )

~k8
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
I. Love. This.

You have no idea.

You've managed to capture something here, and I think I'll call it autumn, not because that is the season in the piece, but because...I really don't know why. Whatever the reason, it is beautiful, elegant, and I think I am in love with it...:D
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
beautiful, intense , touching and imensly passionate. loving and elegantly written, love it. "I want to be able to take the pictures from my head and put them in hers" just so expression and overwelming. a very delicate and moving piece, beautiful.
Doray chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Refreshingly cute.
perishedfeelings chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
When did you write this? I almost completely overlooked it, I thought it was an older story. xD

I love the way you describe things, it's beautiful.
onlyshallow chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
oh, oops. thanks for pointing that out, faye. :D it's hard to catch things when you're tired. _;;
Virginia Giselle chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
I like it. It's pretty.

Perhaps you're typing it underneath the covers because it's 1 AM?
EvT chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
I love this, except for the description part. Well, the grammar in the description part, to be more specific. You started out with present tense. And then, kind of went to past tense, which made it really weird. o.O Hm... it starts changing about here:

When the chords ended...

Could you try revising that? o.O It'll be perfect if you did. ) I really like this.