Reviews for The Deaf Chorus
s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Very nicely written. I like the personification in the second and third stanza, and the little details you've put in to add imagery and depth- "Its faceless visage hidden, / By a blood-crusted cloak" and "With its machete in one hand, / And a rifle in the other". But the best part, in my opinion, is that last stanza- I love the way you end the poem. Wonderful. )