Naw, it isn't the DARKEST poem you've ever written. It is a little creepy, though.

consider adding in your name, heathcliff. no offense intended.

No matter how dark this seethes, it still is probably one of the favorite things that I have seen you write. The descriptions call forth what one might see as a personal Hell... I was taken a back by it.

Reminded me of a witches curse on a lover who did her wrong. Amazing piece. I will definatly have to say this is my fav of yours... so dark and mysterious... I wonder if you would write a story off of this. Bravo to you once again.