Reviews for Diary of a Dreamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YEEEEEPPPPP! Interesting so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG DID U ABANDON THIS STORY! DO U EXPECT THE HUMAN TO WAIT! WRITE! WRITE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally love it! Except I don't really get the part about the cookies... By the way, where did they learn to dance? Well write more, I wanna know how this turns out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() umm i already submitted a review i know but i just thought of something! and yes i know this has nothing to do with ur story, but you should put ur poem here, ur random thoughts one that was in the yearbook! i really liked that one D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i agree with hilary! more romance! D but other than that, this is a great story, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg yining! i SWEAR you've been reading 2 much fanfic. ashely so totally reps malfoy8-) well itz good so far, but ashley isn't stuck up enuff. this is all too goody goody! and make the viv girl more EVIL! BRUTAL! iunno, make her push audrey n make ashley catch her b4 she falls ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! u wrote another chapter! but might i add that goddamn is not a very good word... ohwel ... its a story for teens... ill just ignore it... keep writing though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YA! wat Ms. Fuzzy said! when r u gonna write more! lol time for me and Ms. Fuzzy to plan ur death! MUHAHAHAHAAHAH! well actually just write it... too lazy to plan death... |
![]() ![]() this is a really good story. When are you going to write more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! DUNT KILL PEOPLE BY SUSPENSE! wel ... write more soon! or die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story...KEEP WRITING! |
![]() ![]() H:Romantic(sorta)and love the descriptive words, though you could write a bit longer p A:hihi very nice, yes very nice. im sure ashley and audry will make a great couple. |
![]() ![]() this chapter is very good,and creative, and nice, and cool, and sorta crazy, and funny(sort of) and...yeah... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, great so far, but me, i like RASH RASH stories, c if u can add sum of dat stuff in plz! n not so much detail (dat's y most ppl don't read artimus foul *i don't care if i spelled it rong*) but itz good, try 2 make u're chappys LONGER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL! YINING YINING YINING! GOSH! this story has u marked all over it! i mean, energy wasting n environment control1! SO you! ok, ne wayz, i hope u make "Ashely" (which i STIL think is a GIRL'S name) a REAL bad boy, it'll b so much more interesting!:D |