Reviews for Ledger School For Deficient Teenagers: The Larks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hiya in the chapter a party for parents weekend. There is a sentance that doesn't sound right. Its up around the top where they are talking about yelling back at parents. “You should’ve been there last parents’ weekend,” said Brooke. “We had to have therapy sessions with our families. Kevin’s mom came, but his dad wasn’t there. Anyway, Fin yelled at his mom for almost half an hour. He even made her cry.” it says fin yelled at his mom for almost half a hour when it was talking about kevin yelling cause the 2nd sentence after that fin says that kevins dad use to beat up on him. Just thought i would point it out. If might not be a error just thought i would bring it to your attention. :) love you stories keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Couldn't Jeisson be Kevin's roommate, then all the Larks would be together. Jenna and Ti share a room, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously liked the story it was so good. But the problems' solutions were a bit bogus and unreal. But the ending was really good. I never really liked Fin and Sydney together (for unknown reasons) so I wasn't heartbroken over them not ending up together. Really good job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is pretty good. But all the relationships are a bit random and it seems a bit messy. Besides that, it's pretty good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that last line. I can tell I'll like Alec already. :) Awesome first chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() All Ican say is W.O.W. This was awesome and I can't wait for the sequel. You are a phenomenal writer. :) |
![]() ![]() I think that it was a very god song. |
![]() ![]() He si an Idiot |
![]() ![]() Hm... |
![]() ![]() Ack! poor fin. |
![]() ![]() Jeisson's a jerk face |
![]() ![]() Yay a Kiss! (insert Squeal here) |
![]() ![]() Poor Fin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's over. I can't believe it's over. I loved it. And now I'm going to go read the Cranes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jeisson, then Fin, then Alec? Waahh! :( But, I will read on and I understand that this was to help the plot. *Breathes deeply* Into the next chapter. *Marches off on a horse* I'm crazy, aren't I? Biohazard |