Reviews for Ledger School For Deficient Teenagers: The Larks
Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 7 . 4/14/2008
hiya

in the chapter a party for parents weekend. There is a sentance that doesn't sound right. Its up around the top where they are talking about yelling back at parents.

“You should’ve been there last parents’ weekend,” said Brooke. “We had to have therapy sessions with our families. Kevin’s mom came, but his dad wasn’t there. Anyway, Fin yelled at his mom for almost half an hour. He even made her cry.”

it says fin yelled at his mom for almost half a hour when it was talking about kevin yelling cause the 2nd sentence after that fin says that kevins dad use to beat up on him.

Just thought i would point it out. If might not be a error just thought i would bring it to your attention. :)

love you stories keep going.
Sleorende chapter 39 . 2/14/2008
Couldn't Jeisson be Kevin's roommate, then all the Larks would be together. Jenna and Ti share a room, right?
christinaxxyo chapter 53 . 2/9/2008
I seriously liked the story it was so good. But the problems' solutions were a bit bogus and unreal. But the ending was really good. I never really liked Fin and Sydney together (for unknown reasons) so I wasn't heartbroken over them not ending up together. Really good job :D
christinaxxyo chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
The story is pretty good. But all the relationships are a bit random and it seems a bit messy. Besides that, it's pretty good. :)
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
I love that last line. I can tell I'll like Alec already. :) Awesome first chapter :D
iheartcarebears chapter 53 . 10/20/2007
All Ican say is

W.O.W.

This was awesome and I can't wait for the sequel. You are a phenomenal writer.

:)
Mean titan chapter 34 . 6/29/2007
I think that it was a very god song.
Mean titan chapter 32 . 6/29/2007
He si an Idiot
Mean titan chapter 29 . 6/29/2007
Hm...
Mean titan chapter 27 . 6/29/2007
Ack! poor fin.
Mean titan chapter 12 . 6/29/2007
Jeisson's a jerk face
Mean titan chapter 7 . 6/28/2007
Yay a Kiss! (insert Squeal here)
Mean titan chapter 6 . 6/28/2007
Poor Fin.
1overE chapter 53 . 6/12/2007
It's over. I can't believe it's over. I loved it. And now I'm going to go read the Cranes.
1overE chapter 45 . 6/11/2007
Jeisson, then Fin, then Alec? Waahh! :( But, I will read on and I understand that this was to help the plot. *Breathes deeply* Into the next chapter. *Marches off on a horse* I'm crazy, aren't I?

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