OMG the end! That was a great ending though, well done :)

That's it? Just like that, everything's over? Syd and Fin don't end up together? We don't find out anything about what or how Jei's been doing? Suddenly Ti and Kevin are going off to college? Are you sure you're done with this?

I don't know...It just seemed really...abrupt...Although I like the last scene there...I just...kinda expected a bit more filling in and tying of loose ends before the finish...

XD it was a great ending.

NO ! -first off because it ended, and second off because they didn't make up/get back together- -tear- but that was a good ending. love their last words. XDgood story. loved. bye-byez. Ja-ne.

i hate the ending. the ending was terrible. the ending was horrific. the ending was...bad. very, very, very bad. it was much too sudden, like you just rushed it without any thought. you said nothing at all about if sydney and fin werent talking to eachother or if they were, or WHAT. so im only assuming that they were fine, just never going to get together again. but do they still love eachother? its great that jeisson is coming back, only youre not writing a new story with the larks, so we wont see how that goes. but anyways, the one thing i did like about this chapter was this:

"What's your malfunction?"

keep on writing and update the Cranes like mad. -Ss.

Ive been reading this since the first chapter and have yet to review so here it is. the only dramatic that you didnt put in here was teen pregnancy! or did you. . hmm. anyways good job!

omg i cant believe its over! REALLY good ending, but i thought that fin and sydney would..i dont know, not talk for a while, have other relationships and eventually end up together...anyway, it was GREAT all the same:D:D. please continue on with the Cranes! I enjoyed the first chappie and id like to see where you go with it...anyhoo well done!

YAY! I loved it! great, I can't wait till you start on the new ledger one.

It's was a brilliant story, i would of liked fin and syd together but now that i think about it maybye their better off not. It was a great ending though. I loved the last line: 'What's your malfunction?'

Well done!

Hey.. Ive been reading your story for quite awhile.. anxiously waiting for updates, laughing, crying.. (okay, sorry about the cheesyness, but i had to get it out) But anyways.. I love the ending, it was very effective, though sad.

But Sydney and Fin broke up...no...and they're not getting back together...sadness

I always hate it when a story ends...I'll be reading the new one though!

THis was a great story, you have an amazing amount of understanding for the human emotions! Have oyu studied psychology? I wonder...

Until next time!

~Tzotel

I thought the ending was a little abrupt but I completely understand what you mean. But this was awesome:

"'Wait, wait, wait,' said Fin. 'You can’t sit down yet. You have to answer one question first.'

The kids looked confused. 'What is it?'

Sydney smiled up at them teasingly. 'What’s your malfunction?'"

Thanks for writing such a great story!

HOW CAN YOU DO THIS! Do Jeisson and Sydney get back 'together', or do Fin and Sydney get back together? I WANNT TO KNOW!Please with a cherry on top? (No I am not seven years old, though it is fun to act like it) Great story by the way.

;_; *wails* no it's over... so sad. *cries* well every story has to end eventually. ;_; can't wait for the cranes!

wow... i can't believe it's all over! :'( please update the cranes, i can't go too long without my ledger fix :)

OMG.. NO NO NO.. you cant just leave us like that with not knowing what is going to happen between sydney and Fin.. SERIOUSLY.. you can do an P.S. and explain the relationships turn out PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE