Nice narrative for an essay of a part of your life. Well, Ash (if I may) gay people really do exist... And we just have to respect them for their decision about their sexual will. It's a great narrative, I really followed the happenings up to the end. Good Job Ash.

I figured that you just don't settle for the "good work", or "good story" and you're more interested in people's personal philosophy. That's nice. Hope I can talk to you more since I do think often just like Sky in this story. But I don't fancy myself a philosopher or a beautiful mind. I'm just a simple person who loves to think, read and write.

deep

Wah I'm amused, kind of got lost a little, but the ending was nice ) I hope you keep writing more often

Wow, I loved it! It's a really beautiful story. Keep it up!