Reviews for Fall Off a Cliff Laughing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() truly hilarious story and very well written aswell! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable. I love Leon and Aristos. If you do a sequel, please make it about their relationship. Not that Skorpios and Vale aren't good characters, but I have to admit that as soon as Aristos showed up I was more interested in his and Leon's relationship. Maybe it's because we really don't know what goes on between those two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That ended rather abruptly, but it's still a good story.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow...I'm reading the original for the first time. I'm sorry your work got stolen (that's how I discovered it) and I did wonder how it was getting updated so fast on FFN. well I hope things clear up, can't wait to finish this *adds to faves* and you are an incredible author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. Silly Leon, thinking that telling Aristos off would get him to leave. I'm following with Vale's assessment that Ari jumped Leon in the stall. It seems like something Ari would do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a nice epilogue. I hope you shall make a sequel someday. Anyways, good job! |
![]() ![]() *superflyingtackleglomp* You finished! And with a Leon/Aristos thing, too! Although it would've been great to have Mark make a new appearence, this was just as good! You WILL do a sequel, right? Pretty please? *tempts you with cookies* |
![]() ![]() ![]() cutest story ever :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, so cute! XD So happy there was an epilogue :) Great work, I love your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't suppose you could do a short little one-shot about leon and aristos? |
![]() ![]() Aw, cutsie fuzzy fluff! But that was short. (Not that me mentioning it will make you fix it.) But even if those two don't want to know Aristos's methods, I sure do. In vivid, graphic, M-rated detail. *sigh* Alas, a wish to go unfulfilled. eh, que sera, sera, no? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::claps:: Kudos aplenty. XD I however, do want to know how Aristos cheered up Leon ::wink:: If I was by a cliff reading this story, I sure would have fallen off by now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a sequel! a sequel! lol the ending was unexpected and a bit hanging. XD but good work! hahahaha (gawd... aristos is so blunt... yet so cool XD) |
![]() ![]() . so cute! I totally love this story, very entertaining. Thanks for writing this, and it'd be great to see a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() TB: It's over... So it is possible to feel happy and sad at the same time. Anywho, I LOVED this story. It was so adorable. *Gives her best puppy eyes* Sequal please? Maybe with more Leon and Aristos? Alondral: Move your furry hind end. We've got work to do. TB: -_- Slave driving muse. Keep writing and hope to maybe see a sequal! |