Your grammar is appreciated more than you know.

This story made me both blush furiously (throughout most of it) and laugh.

I love this! Vale the fae!

Awesome story! D

It's interesting so far :)

I find this story very amusing. This was a job well done :D

Humurous but characterization is too abrupt here as well. Example, The main character doesn't bother to question his sanity about being turned into a fairy or meeting the grim reapers son. I like your one-shots better. Better luck next time.

Now this- this is what I'm talking about! Funny, interesting, a touch of steamy foreshadowing! Exactly what the doctor ordered! (I also think I realize what the problem was with Over the Weekend. You made it an angst. You do not write good angst. You write good subtle, vague, one-shot(ty) angst, but not fullblown, impact the reader, multi-chaptered angst. But you write fabulous multi-chaptered humor.)

Ch. 21: Aristos invited himself on Leon's date with the bimbo. Too funny! Then accosts him in the bathroom. But how cruel of you not to divulge just how Aristos managed to cheer him up! :)

Ch. 20: The one major thing this story was missing through out was the reason why Skorpios turned Vale into a Fairy. We got no back story on how he even found Vale and why he did what he did. Did he see Vale on a visit to Earth and decide he wanted him? Was it during his mother's death (when the grim reaper would have visited her?) None of this was explained. So I was left trying to guess on my own.

Ch. 19. This was a great chapter. So Aristos kissed Leon! I knew it! So what was the deal with Leon inviting the bimbo home from work. That was just random and really didn't fit into the story.

Anyways, I'm so glad that Skorpios played a little hard to get there at the end, forcing Vale to kiss him. :)

Ch. 18: Yeah! Finally Vale stood up to Mark. Why does he keep going to school though? It does seem pointless.

What a surprise that Aristos and Leon were sitting on the couch together. They acted like old friends. Hmmmmm.

Ch. 16: Yep, this pretty much sums up what I think of Vale too:

"No, it's not." I suppressed the urge to spout off every other cuss word I could think of. "This is all my fault. This is all because I'm such a selfish fucking bastard, it's all because I'm so fucking scared. That's it, okay? I don't even want to be around you because I'm a self-centered pansy and I know I'll end up screwing this up."

Ch. 16: Lovely, Leon brings home a bimbo to prove he's not gay. Nice.

Ch. 15: Finally, Vale is admitting he likes Skorpios. But his bitchiness is getting old. Skorpios is getting tired of it too.