Reviews for Fall Off a Cliff Laughing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 14: Awww, Leon is in the closet. And they share some brotherly love :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 13: This story just keeps getting more bizarre! Still don't know why Skorpios changed Vale into a Fairy. His older brother shows up to take him back to the Mines. Skorpios doesn't even explain ANYTHING to Vale about ANYTHING. I mean, WTF? I Leon attracted to Aristos? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 12: Didn't like this chapter so much. More of Vale whining and being a pain in the ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 11: More of Vale being whiny and unappreciative of Skorpios saving his ass once again from Mark and his cronies. But he can't go back until he gets a license! And now Vale is stuck with him. Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 10: Vale needs slapped and slapped hard. He's being a whiny little bitch. For god's sake! Get a fucking grip already! I don't know what Skorpios sees in him but he could do better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 9: Vale is going to need serious therapy after this. Poor kid. It must suck to have a drop dead gorgeous supernatural being wanting you so badly that he came to Earth to turn you into a Fairy. I would much rather go back to my sucky life where I'm harassed by homophobes on a daily basis. Yeah, sounds so much better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 9: OMG, Vale is such a dumbass! What the hell did he think would happen if he went to school? Sigh. Thank goodness he was able to escape. Ok, I love Smith already!: "I'm here simply to keep out all terrorists, telemarketers, and other general nuisances." LOL! Is there a difference between terrorists and telemarketers? I think not! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 7: Now Vale realizes going out in public wasn't the smartest thing to do. lol. The necklace is interesting. And you can't tell me that Vale is seriously considering going to school with his wings! OMG.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 6: OMG, this chapter was so good. I was laughing through out. I can't imagine how I would react if my younger brother had wings all of a sudden. But Leon took it quite well. But going out for breakfast with Vale's wings being so huge? What the hell were they thinking? That alone was hysterical! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 5: Oh Shit! Leon caught them in bed together! Priceless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 4: They're going to be found out by Leon! Ha Ha Ha! Vale is having the most lovely physical reactions to Skorpios. How sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 3: Vale's whiny bitchiness is hysterically funny. He's not taking becoming a Fairy very well...lol. Ut oh, now enters older brother, Leon. This is going to get good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 2: Ahhh, Mark, the typical homophobic jock Duuuuude enters onto the scene. He's been making Vale's life a living hell and gets the shit scared out of him by Skorpios. Love it! Skorpios is so affectionate and sweet. Just love him! I'm dying to know why he turned Vale into a fairy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch. 1: What an angry young man Vale is. He totally makes me smile. He hates his haircut, runs into an incredibly sexy goth dude who ends up on top of him and refuses to move. He happens to be the Grim Reaper's son whose mission is to turn Vale into a Fairy. Priceless! |
![]() ![]() That was a fine story, you write well, had a little bit of everything that makes a story interesting and captivating...glad for the sweet ending too. |