Reviews for Fall Off a Cliff Laughing |
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![]() ![]() Well you got me hooked at One, my friend. Now on to the rest...! |
![]() ![]() i loved the story! the ending was fab. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! Loved this story! Lawl to Leon and Aristos. They would be so damn cute. -DxH |
![]() ![]() ![]() kool i like this story, i think you should do Leon and Aristos story that would be cute |
![]() ![]() you punched the wrong guy! |
![]() ![]() punch him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this, though I am disappointed that Mark didn't have a final appearance, and that you never described the wings, and that the only fairy feature was the wings, and that you didn't go into detail about Skorpios' father, I thought he was going to play an important role... That is a lot of disappointments... But I really did like it! If there is ever a sequel I will definitely read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome epilogue. i really liked the story and (aside from the fact that I really can't believe I finished that in tonight, but whatever) a sequel would be nice. I liked the way the epilogue wasn't about Vale and Skorpios but their brothers (that looks weird...). I guess I want to know more about Nik now, he seemed like an interesting character and I think that you neglected him a little bit. I loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I lied. but it's IN-TER-MISS-ION... Yeah, me and my friends are freaks. Plus this once again has some awesome lines and I just have to compliment you on their awesomeness. ' It's time to play Let's See How Many Times I Can Kick Leon In The Ribs Before He Gives Me Up for Adoption and Moves Away to Canada. Yay! Anyway, I promised to shut up, but I also have to give reviews... so I hope these degrading reviews please you at least a little bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *incredible high-pitched squeal that kills the ears of all in the nearby vicinity* Skorpios's brothers are awesome! *mother: tries to read the Hunger Games, glares at me when I start laughing again... Me: What? *looks up all innocent** Anyway, the quality of my reviews are quickly degrading, so I guess I'll just have to settle for reviewing tomorrow when my brain has restored itself... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good laugh for Vale revising his vocabulary. Three cheers! Yes, drunk on laughter and high on air. Or the other way around. And it's perfectly possible. As you can see, I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, I refuse to obsess only ten chapters in without knowing all the characters (I think). Anyway, another good chapter. I made my mom read an awesome dramatic (ish) story and I'm probably distracting her by continually laughing (I don't know, I'm high on air again today?)... Another compliment, yes, because this story deserves it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, his little brother is adorable! (Yeah, I like little brother characters...) Funny chapter, again... my family spent the entire time looking at me strangely and I spent the entire time laughing my head off. Another amazing chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I see that we're going somewhere past where most romance stories go. Yay! I don't think the story's going too fast. It has a constant fast pace, though; some stories which have a slower pace suddenly speed up, that's really annoying. But I find this constant faster pace enjoyable, and I think it works for a humorous story. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() New favorite lines: #1: Dig hole. #2: Crawl in. #3: Die quickly. ... and, "Okay, let go of the human," he said in a do-as-I-say-or-I'll-make-something-hurt tone. Much as I don't like to admit it, I really love humorous stories. This is amazing! I also think you did a good job of writing from first person; I absolutely fail at it. So, good job! |