|Reviews for Crystalized Roses|
| CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I like it for some reason. Very good. KEep up the work!
| Lacus chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Hello... This poem is very moving in an odd sense... I very muched felt the feeling going through this piece... Lovely. And No I do not know of flyleaf, but I do know Tenchi Muyo. Lovely .
| Shazinco chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Very dark, I like it a lot.
| Archipelago chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Like cool. love that middle line, great job. love the title(that's what grabbed me)
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
i recognise the style,cant think where from nice.
| ygg chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Wow! Such strong and vivid imagery. I like the dark, almost creepy touch of this haiku. Superb!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I love the feeling your word choice gives off...nice work!
| McQuinn chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
WOW. I loved this. Much because I read it over 982374987 times to see if I could understand it...this is what it meant to me:
"Crystalized roses" basically made me think of drops of blood.
"Weeping tears of blackest death" confirms my thoughts of the roses being drops of blood. The dripping blood can be a metaphor of the weeping tears.
"As they drink your blood" totally threw me off. I'm still confused, but I like to keep it that way. It makes me think about this. :P Brilliant writing.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Deeply dark. I loved it, keep up the good work.