|Reviews for In The Eyes Of God|
| Arkash chapter 4 . 9/1/2005
Sophia Hagia, cool name. *_* I will be curious about the Wanderers.
| Arkash chapter 3 . 8/31/2005
Adding the political strife was a good plot twist. *_*
| Cam S chapter 3 . 8/30/2005
Alright...an update, and close on the heels of another.
I'm having a hard time pinning down anything like a dominant culture-you have English floating around with at least one japanese name in the middle of it. Also, some of the names seem kind of...odd...where did you take them from?
| Arkash chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Joel's stasis dream is good. All in all, an improved chapter.
Good work! *_*
| Cam S chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Interesting start. I like the changed in characterization-it's a bit darker, and I appreciate that.
Also, I think I should let you know that you have Snider responding to himself.
| Cam S chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I read the original a while ago, and enjoyed it...I hope the same will be true of the rewrite.
You've got a solid beginning here: just a few minor technical things (begin a new paragraph with a new speaker, but you only made that mistake once, near the beginning.)
Continue writing, man, I look forward to the result.
| Arkash chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I just sent you an email asking for updates, and here they are. *_*
This is awesome!
Finally, there is a Harron among the Iwans and the Oversouls. And again, superior tech stuff.
Good Job! *_*
| Scraper chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Interesting little piece. I was about to ask you if you were also going to make a character based on yourself, and this pretty much answers the question.