Reviews for In The Eyes Of God
Arkash chapter 4 . 9/1/2005
Sophia Hagia, cool name. *_* I will be curious about the Wanderers.

Great chapter.
Arkash chapter 3 . 8/31/2005
Adding the political strife was a good plot twist. *_*
Cam S chapter 3 . 8/30/2005
Alright...an update, and close on the heels of another.

I'm having a hard time pinning down anything like a dominant culture-you have English floating around with at least one japanese name in the middle of it. Also, some of the names seem kind of...odd...where did you take them from?
Arkash chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Joel's stasis dream is good. All in all, an improved chapter.

Good work! *_*
Cam S chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Interesting start. I like the changed in characterization-it's a bit darker, and I appreciate that.

Also, I think I should let you know that you have Snider responding to himself.
Cam S chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I read the original a while ago, and enjoyed it...I hope the same will be true of the rewrite.

You've got a solid beginning here: just a few minor technical things (begin a new paragraph with a new speaker, but you only made that mistake once, near the beginning.)

Continue writing, man, I look forward to the result.
Arkash chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
I just sent you an email asking for updates, and here they are. *_*

This is awesome!

Finally, there is a Harron among the Iwans and the Oversouls. And again, superior tech stuff.

Good Job! *_*
Scraper chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Interesting little piece. I was about to ask you if you were also going to make a character based on yourself, and this pretty much answers the question.
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