Reviews for The King and the beggar girl
Eirien chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
Franziska: An das Waterhouse-Bild hatte ich gar icht gedacht, weil das Gedicht eine konkrete Vision beschreibt, die ich selbst hatte, aber jetzt wo du es erwähnst fallen mir die Ähnlichkeiten (aber auch Unterschiede) zu dem Waterhouse-Bild auf, gerae auch im Titel des Gedichts. Es ist ein eben auch ein archetypisches Motiv...
Erlkoenigin chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
Sehr schön! Das ist doch bstimmt von dem Waterhouse-Bild angeregt, oder?

Viele liebe Grüße

Franziska
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Nach soviel Lob fällt mir nichts Neues ein, ein sehr gelungenes Gedicht. Besonders gut gefällt mir Your promises the shimmering

butterflies of childhood.
blackoutroses chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
beautifully written. i loved the line 'all You whisper is a kiss'- the words go beyond the page. on my faves.
Brittany Studer chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
I loved every line of this poem...very well written with good descriptive words. Well done!-Brittany :)
Niniel Uskglass chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
I like this. You have excellent word choice. Although to my taste, some things like "your gift to me/is joy" are a little too happy and optimistic, I like how you entwine those thoughts with the thought of leaving, still managing to keep a positive spin on things. I like the save me from myself at the end. I think that is a sentiment that many of us can relate to.
bib chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
sehr eindrucksstark, vor allem die Zeilen "I'm dancing in the dawn of every colour"und "You are here, with open arms, to save me from myself" Ich denke die Liebe ist fähig die Traurigkeit in einem Menschen zu ersetzen, wenn auch nicht sofort und vollständig. Das Gedicht kommt zu meinen favorite stories :-)
E.A.Tetje chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Wow, that is beautiful! It is also a wonderful reminder of God's enduring and eternal love for us. Well written. God bless and keep writing (I shall try to get back into reviewing). Bethy
azn aquarian chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
wow..this is rilli nice..you're a great writer..)
leben chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
beautiful
Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
I really like this. The imagery and symbolism is beautiful. Great work.
Systole chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
i liked this, I did not think you wrote poems concerning religion, this inspired me, and for that. thank you. I suggest the use of appositives at the end of certain verses, and use of commas. As if you already do not know, the line, "Your promises the shimmeringbutterflies of childhood.", needs a comma after promises, and maybe a semicolon. That's it from me.

Talk later
Sreym chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
This is a beautiful poem, I love it. Definitely one of my favorites, it's written perfectly.
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
it is amazingly beautiful.i gasped at the end...it is just perfect,all over.i adore the ending,such a subtle is a powerful image that is left in my mind...whoa,thankyou for writing it! a fave :)
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Inspirational and soothing.
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