Reviews for The King and the beggar girl
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
it's nice how you compared it to "beauty for ashes". i love the verse AND the song. wait, songS. good job.

happy writing
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
I love the flow. The first stanza is great. Very nice.
Luneko chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
This is really beautiful. I especially like the third stanza and the imagery of "rainbow grace" lingering like dew.

Exquisite.
Getuie chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Touching... beautiful... this has such a powerful message... such a wonderful confession. Absolutely loving it.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
i am going to assume that you are referring to a special someone, who is apparently a gift from God. this angel has shown you what true love is and is therefore reigning in your heart. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
beautiful. it is an amazing poem, really. everything flows so well and gave me such a WAFF (warm and fuzy feeling) all over. it is remarkable, powerful and done so wonderously. I love it.

* noelle
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