Reviews for Time
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
I like how you use italics to make the important words show up in your poems. Very Nice :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
I love the last line.. short, but very good poem
gooey chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
SIGH right on the spot. *clap clap* i love this one.

RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Time, is the oddest thing one minutes it's with you, the next it's gone... I live in the past... I like your poem
Red Vision chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Wow, you have a beautiful writing style, this poem reminded me about how time can pass slowly and quickly. Look at some of my poetry when you get the chance, bye. :)