Reviews for Creed
Burnt Bread chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
I like the way that the action has been told in fragmented sentences. Each line is like a shard of a broken mirror. I also appriciate the last few lines: Why? You have become the murderer you despise. Probably the only thing I could say is that a more abstract approach could have enhanced the overall mood, but I don't really know what I'm talking about. Well done, though. Keep writing!