|Reviews for Ingénue|
| sunray chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
i've already told you this, but i really, really love this poem - esp. the end and the beginning. i couldn't quite tell you how the whole of the poem fits into itself to make a beautiful work of art or whatev (i could never be a literary critic), but there are some lines that really strike a chord with me - "the heavy staccato bass like punctuation" for one (no pun intended). i guess i really like the incorporation of colors, music, scents, sights...
sweet poem, man.
| euphonia chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Beautiful. My favorite of yours yet. Perhaps a bit too many commas, but a lovely ending and amazing original combinations of words. I love it!