Reviews for Return of the Magi
Indicates chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
The format could use some work, as well as some description and better pacing. But all in all it's okay.
moongazer7 chapter 6 . 5/12/2008
It's really good, I thought I was reading a real professional author's book! You spelt one thing wrong, though.
netsirk chapter 13 . 12/5/2002
Hey, I just found this story. Way cool concept! Is it too late to ask for another chapter?
Bug chapter 11 . 2/12/2001
IT's great! I love it! It's just as good as the first one maybe even better. HOpe to see ya soon!
Jodi chapter 3 . 2/12/2001
Hey mis chicas!

Great story so far! I can't wait to read the rest. I miss ya!
Ra'akone chapter 11 . 2/7/2001
Well written...It's really cool. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Adele chapter 1 . 2/6/2001
Faaaaabulous story, my dear, but of course I should think so, I co-wrote it! Mwuh hahaha! There were no reviews, so I thought I'd be kind.