Reviews for Beginnings, Middles, and Endings
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
The repetition really works well for this poem. I think your concept of marriage as being a form of imprisonment is very interesting. A rather simple poem, but it says a lot, without saying it outright. Wonderful work.
Achlys Dyes Poetry chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
very sweet, i like it, broad out kind of view and slowish, a touch happy sad, i dont know, it's good, nicely done
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
This was superb, I especially liked the last two lines, the question was very well written.

Thanks for the review~)
soi.deliciosa chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
are you happy?
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Beautiful, well written piece. My favorite line : "And ask you-in your stillness/If you're happy"

Good job, keep writing.
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
so the space thingy didn't work...dammit...and now I am reviewing my own piece. This blows.