I daresay death won't always be like that. You remind me of E.A. Poe only your poems are less..."dark" in the essence...than Poe's. But what am I saying? Poe is, like, a landmark of English. So just screw the last 2 sentences. Bye now.

I would haev to say this is one of my favorites of yours dear roth. This is beautiful and the imagery just blew me away.

"You’ll sit out in your rocking chair like an actor who’s lost his fame," Awsome line. I like how you use imagery that people can see in their minds eye.

I guess I took from this a sort of ending of a relationship piece. SOrt of when your at the end of giving someone tries, so you leave them alone and let them take their time to realize they will be lonely without you.

I really liked this. Definatly a favorite. The flow and rhyme was great. Bravo.

I love this poem. I love the details and the imagery. It's very deep, and I don't really know how to say this, but well thought out. Keep up the good writting.

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

i love it...i really like the poem...good work and keep it up.