Reviews for Formless Corpse
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
thes rhyme shceme is really cool and originial.. i think you mean fate though... other than that I really like it.. very cool and original
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
very unique. i enjoyed reading it. there's a spelling error on the second line, 'fate'. other than that, great job 0)
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
o0o, i like this very much. it flows so well, and it's dark too! such a yummy bonus. lol, i should cherish the poems i read from now on, seeing as how high school is going to take over my life soon, lol. really great poem, i liked how you used another style, it DID turn out really well...

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
shinco chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Yo, Shazaam... fate is spelled f-a-t-e, not f-a-i-t! lol You really are losing your mind, aren't you? lol J/k, anyway, this poem was really good, I liked it bunches of lots of bunches!... what was that about? lol Oh, well, GO SHAZAAM!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
oh thats really different and weird... in a good way tho! i like the spookyness and all in this. very clever!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
beautiful and deeply dramatic, your lines tpuch deep. love it.

~* noelle