|Reviews for Operation: Wolf|
| Gummi-Arms chapter 5 . 10/30/2005
Hmm... fast and furious, but you might want to decbribe a few things better. For one thing, you migth want to describe the soldiers, their uniforms, their standard armaments. And the scene where watcher dies... well, as much of a bitch as she was, she deserved a better death scene.
| Gummi-Arms chapter 2 . 10/13/2005
Heh. Poor Jim.
| Gummi-Arms chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Intersting premise, but perhaps you should have slowed things down a little. Given a little more background. Or perhaps you should have played up the part with the 'werewolf' a little more.
One thing I think that chapter needed was a more in-depth transformation of John. (And for that matter, if Lycanthrope is a disease, what makes it spread so quickly. Normally there is a substantial incubation time.) Even if the disease is supposed to act within seconds, he should show some sign of changing as it takes hold, perhaps goign into a siezure, or he starts howling like a madman, spewing gibberish.