Reviews for Pulp
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
I do like it. It's a helpless image. Desperate and bold but similarly weak.
LauraKM chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Fab imagery in this, really love it. Going on my favorite list.
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
this is interesting, I love haikus.

Paul Marsz chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Now, I've never been a huge fan of haikus, but reading your stuff, I have a newfound respect for the darn things.

I put the review on this one because I think you completely succeed in fulfilling a haiku's purpose: using the exactly correct words to paint a picture of one moment in time. Plus the "well-flowered virgin" phrase is absolutely brilliant.

Beautiful! Keep on writing.
in theory chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
The single word as the title is one of my favourite words, it's so strange on the ear. I always respect authors who have the ability to write powerful Haikus, something I've never been able to pull off properly. "Well-flowered/virgin" caught me by surprise, as well-flowered might suggst that he's not exactly innocent, yet the "virgin" is quite a shock. Nice work, thanks for all of your reviews :)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
beautiful haiku really. I adore the flow and just the overall build up. lovely overall.

~* noelle
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
strange, emotional charged...great haiku! i wish i could do them! x
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Thats interesting, I guess It makes you think. I have no idea what you are trying to say! :)
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
cool you nice.
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