Reviews for Forward
drummerbonbon chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Wow! You are good! Thanks for all the great reviews! You rock!
Maxwell Brine chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Great Poem!

Keep writing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
nice metaphor..I like this haiku a lot better than some of your others
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Don't know if you purposely placed the last line not centered with the first two but I must say I am atracted by it for Yes, it seems that oft in order before going forward we go backward as it were in the learning of new life lessons. Connie/Maisha
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Some things are best learned alone to gain strength.
Chaotic Lionel chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
To drown against you... nice.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Cool, but I liked "Moonlight Baby" a lot more!
Jasmine Olathe chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Very nice. I like how you express the conflicting aspects of losing one's individuality and gaining strength that sometimes come up in new relationships with the swimming metaphor (at least that's what I saw ).
method acting chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Lovely formatting. Beautiful. Faves.
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
very nice. the whole theme of it is great. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
account not in use chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
ah yes...
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 9/1/2005

in theory chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Is the part intentional? That baffles me, and if it's meant to be there then it'll require a thorough re-read. I like it a lot though, it expresses a gentle rhythm.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
a gorgeous haiku. deep, moving and passionate. I love it.

~* noelle
Angel Underneath chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
aw. this is sad. makes me contemplate things going on with me and my friends. Submissive and sad.