Reviews for Competition What Competition?
Thurayya chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Oh, wow. This is amazing.

First of all, I love the format.

The end... its just so, 'ha, take that', that I can't help but love it. Good job!

Reminds me of my father. x.x

- ala :D
Written chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
you are clever with your ending! poetry is form, and you write as well as always.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Clever ending. This very painful and beautiful and again I am so sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner. Keep up the good work! QueenVixta
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
yes... the usual parent puttig down their children scenario good poem

keep writing!
LyraAlluse chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I really like the style of this poem! It's very unique and different. Good job!
CryNowLaughLater chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
This is good, I like the form used, and the emotion is definetly there. nice work. Bravo!