Reviews for Breaking My Heart
writerforever chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
So heartbreaking yet full of hope.
Barry Klontz chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Being unnoticed, left on that table, it's hard.. I like the ending, but it is so hopeful, and my experience is that hope breaks a heart even more.
Winter Reflections chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
this is really good! very noice!

thanks for reviewing!

kw u have talent!
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
I like it. Some interesting imagery and metaphore which could, perhaps, be developed a bit further. It's good.

Matt
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I don't really...like it that much...

Sorry...Its just, usually the Choppyness in your Poems Really works, but it makes this poem un-interesting. This poem is a poem about someone breaking someone elses heart, though, it could have used more Word-Beuaty...

This is the first thing I have read by you that I really wasn't interested in reading all that much...

I'm Sorry! (Honesty Kills)

Timothy HazeloTrue Beleiver of Xenu