Reviews for Finally, but maybe
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Can relate! I usually am afraid I've scared them off though! lol I really liked the 2nd to last line about "falling into the infinite circle" - a lovely image!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Nice work Jo! Keep it up!

Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
good poem although there are a lot of "yous" and the flows a little off... but the message is wonderful!
Pure Autumn chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
i like it quite sweet really. You havent rhymed but that makes it more serious or woteva lol x
Leighton Carrington chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
well it ain't bad, you actually managed to NOT rhyme hardly got into the situation at all though. I know it's a poem, I know it's not supposed to get into the detail, but at least explain a LITTLE.